All is well, I’m feeling swell
Though rain clouds dwelling
Above my head
Could surely bring hell
I hold the secret to survive this spell
So let the clouds swell and the sky spills out
But, I’ll never break this shell and tell
Until this life I bid farewell
The Secret
Very eloquent and profound… just that sometimes the poem is sacrificed in order to rhyme. ( Ihope you will accept my opinion…and admiration.)
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Thank you Chrissie. Thanks for stopping by and sharing 🙂
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You’re so welcome. Do look at my poetry, I rarely rhyme, but try to use alliteration, rhymes mid phrase…
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I love rhyming and the use of rhymes in writing. It grabs my attention. I guess different strokes for different folks 😉 . We can’t all like the same flavor of an ice-cream 🙂
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Yes. The balance is having a poem that says something or having sweet words. A fine line.
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!! 👍👍☀️🍦🍦!! 🙌🙌💥👌👌!! 💛💚🙏😆😊!!
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Sometimes it is nice to go out in the rain and feel the refreshing of life being born again 🙂
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I’ve been in the rain a few times without an umbrella… I like the drizzle on my skin. You’re right it can be very refreshing 🙂
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What a brilliant poem! I love secrets!
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Haha… Thank you Lorraine 🙂
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You’re we,come. And actually, I LOVE the rhyming. Personally I feel it makes the poem Just my opinion 😊
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Thank you so much Lorraine… I feel the same 🙂
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Honestly, it really struck me. Great writing
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I appreciate you 🙂
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You are most welcome
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Beautifully written!❤️
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Thank you dear 🙂
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Go and dance in the rain 💃🏻 it is such fun
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That’s very true. Thanks for for stopping by Ashok 🙂
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Pleasure
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